TAILS OF NEOCLES
Outline Scene one is an introduction if I make this longer it will relate to an idea that I have for a later time but I am out of time to write more. Scene 2 Is when Alcibiades is trialed and has to come back with the ship but sails to Sparta and tells of their plans in anger. Scene three is going to be a big fight scene with two major battles when they first land and when the reinforcements arrive
Scene 1:
This scene starts out with Neocles, the main character of this story, Neocles was wandering in the streets of Athens and came across a little clearing where there where many gamblers
Neo: Good day to you my brother of Athens
Gambler: G’day Brother got any coins
Neo: Aye what’s the name of the game?
Gambler: It’s a new game with dice
Neo: describe this new game (interested)
Gambler: Its rather simple really all you do is roll the dice but role higher than me
Neo: Okay lets play (Determined to win)
Neocles has a severe gambling problem and is fairly good at it which is not very helpful in the time of plague. Often times he will go out wandering looking for a place to gamble instead of protecting himself from the plague.
Gambler: Aye let us play you roll first and what you roll I must beat. (with a sinister look on his face)
Neo: (rolling the dice) Hoho I have rolled a solid 6 good luck beating that my good friend
Gambler: Lucky roll (rolls a 3)
Neo: alas good brother I believe I have won this roll
Gambler: that you did my friend shall we play for real now
Neo: Yes lets (drops a bag of coins on the table and pulls out his die)
Gambler: let’s say we wager 1 drachma
Neo: sounds good shall we roll?
Gambler: yes let’s I’ll go first (rolls die)
Neo: very nice a 4 my turn (rolls die)
Gambler: whaaaaaaaat? Another 6?
Neo: yes how bout we up the wager to 10 drachma
Gambler: sounds like a bet
Again Neocles and the gambler keep paying till the gambler is down to his last drachma
Gambler: well my friend it looks like you have run me dry
Neo: that I have I must be going now
Gambler: do you take me for a fool
Neo: I know not what you speak of
Gambler: your die sir
Neo: what of it?
Gambler: it is enchanted to only role 6’s (anger in his eyes)
Neo: No it is only my lucky day that is all
Gambler: no sir u have played me like a fool
Neo: Ok ok I have played you for a fool but on this note I must bid you ado
Neocles has used a loaded die to trick the gambler and win all his money now Neocles takes off with the gambler chasing him through the city Neocles finds a low roofed building to jump onto and hide.
Gambler: WHERE ARE YOU BOY!!!!!!!!!!! I know you’re here. Come out come out where ever you are.
After some time the gambler leaves to return home. Neo looks around and notices many people are looking ill he asks a nearby man what is going on
Neo: Excuse me sir but what is wrong with everybody in this district
Odd Looking old man: Shipment brought back plague
Neo: oh no I must get out of here
Odd looking old man: its only a matter of time before it reaches everyone
Neo: excuse me sir but what is your name
Odd Looking old man: My name is Socrates I walk around preaching my ideas to others. I am a philosopher
Neo: what you are is crazy
Neocles takes off not realizing that this man was not crazy at all rather he was a critical thinker and would impact everyone
Scene 2:
The Athenians get a message from an ally in Sicily asking for help from the Spartan allies the Syracuse. The Athenians decide they will send 50000 men to assist their allies and expand their land and power. The Spartans prepare their fleet and men but the night before they are supposed to take off for Sicily someone vandalizes the whole city and crushes the statues if front of peoples houses.
Neo: someone vandalizes the whole city and yet we still sail?
Random Athenian: The senators will deal with that we must invade Sicily
Neo: Fair enough but who could have done such a thing?
RA: Nobody knows we just need to keep our heads strait and continue to Sicily.
Neo: Yes sir
About a month later in their journey a messenger ship reaches them.it is addressed to Alcibiades one of the generals of the expedition
Messenger: I bring a message from the senators of Athens in the absence of Alcibiades we held a trial for the vandal of the statues
Alcibiades: THIS IS OUTRAGEES ARE YOU SUSPECTING I DID THIS.
Messenger: I regret to inform you that you have been found guilty by a trial of your fellow Athenians and you are to come back with us
Alcibiades: Very well if I am too be accused of this act then I would not fight or lead for Athens any way men you are all dedicated and hard workers I wish all of you good luck
Neo: ALCEBIADES has Athens lost their minds? How will we win without his leadership?
RA: WE FIGHT HARD!!!!!
What the Athenians don’t know is that through his anger Alcibiades rides to Sparta to warn them of the attack
Alcibiades: Good Spartans it appears that 50000 Athenians sea towards Sicily to take out your allies
Spartan leader: How do we know what your saying is true?
Alcibiades: Because I was the leader of the expedition until I was betrayed by my city
Spartan leader: Very well assemble a few very fast messenger ships to war the Syracuse and tell them to assemble
Scene 3:
The Spartans land on Sicily and are ambushed they have no idea how the Syracuse knew they would land there but the Syracuse had them pinned
Neo: What is our strategy for this battle?
RA: We don’t know the generals are arguing
Neo: well what are we supposed to do
RA: we charge!!!!
Neo doesn’t like the idea of charging in aimlessly so he goes and talks to the generals
Neo: what is the plan general?
General: we must hold them off till our reinforcements arrive
Neo: Yes sir General
The battle rages on the Athenians are getting crushed and when the reinforcements arrive they still get demolished and the entire Spartan army is destroyed
I would like to see more research evident in your play. More detail in your dialogue; I thought you were on the right track with Alcibiades.
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